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Post by demonchantress on Jul 21, 2004 22:04:15 GMT -5
I need help writting this paragraph for class tomarrow, it should be about 100 words long and I would be better able to do this if it was not for the kick ass pain killers I have flowing through my body. lol
if you can help, pease do...
Young or old, today's college students face numerous pressures. Older students face the challange of coming into classrooms that in some cases, have changed a great deal from when they were last in school. Many find that scheduling their classes, to fit into their daily lives hard. They may have to learn how to juggle their jobs and family life, while still finding time to study subjects that may be completely new to them.
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Post by WorldOfPain on Jul 21, 2004 22:08:46 GMT -5
I'm not the best at english, but I'll try to help out
Many find that scheduling their classes, to fit into their daily lives hard.
I'm not too sure if you need a comma there or not, my opinion is without, but like i said, i'm no english major.
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Post by WorldOfPain on Jul 21, 2004 22:22:22 GMT -5
If you wanna make it longer, in the second sentence..
"older students face the challenge of overcoming obstacles such as coming into classrooms that in some cases, have changed a great deal from when they were last in school."
I guess that's an option
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Post by TheGentleStorm on Jul 21, 2004 22:22:58 GMT -5
Today's college students young or old, face numerous pressures. Older students face the challange of coming into classrooms that in some cases, have changed a great deal from when they were last in school. Many younger students find that scheduling their classes to fit into their daily lives hard. Many have to learn how to arrange their jobs and family life, while still finding time to study subjects that may be completely new to them.
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Post by TheGentleStorm on Jul 21, 2004 22:27:36 GMT -5
If you wanna make it longer, in the second sentence.. "older students face the challenge of overcoming obstacles such as coming into classrooms that in some cases, have changed a great deal from when they were last in school." I guess that's an option good word overcoming Today's college students young or old, face numerous pressures. Older students face the challenge of overcoming obstacles such as coming into classrooms that in some cases, have changed a great deal from when they were last in school. Many younger students find that scheduling their classes to fit into their daily lives hard. Many have to learn how to arrange their jobs and family life, while still finding time to study subjects that may be completely new to them.
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Post by WorldOfPain on Jul 21, 2004 22:30:03 GMT -5
"overcoming into classrooms"
You forgot the full sentence buddy ;D
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Post by demonchantress on Jul 21, 2004 22:32:31 GMT -5
You guys are truly AWESOME. thank you for what you have written.
Give me a few minutes to use the suggestions you gave me, and I will repost what I have.
Today's college students, young or old, face numerous pressures. Older students face the challange of overcoming classrooms that in some cases, have changed a great deal from when they were last in school. They find the use of calculators and computers are now common place, and used by all students. Many younger students find that scheduling their classes to fit into their daily lives hard. Some may only be able to take one or two classes each quarter, so they may still meet their work and family obligations. Most have to learn how to arrange their jobs and family life, while still finding time to study subjects that may be completely new to them.
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Post by TheGentleStorm on Jul 21, 2004 22:33:40 GMT -5
ok i modified the post, i also have a few other friend working on this but they are not members here...
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Post by TheGentleStorm on Jul 21, 2004 22:40:39 GMT -5
a good friend came up with this for you
Todays new world of college students has changed drastically from what was once thought as a normal student atenndence. With many soccer mom and dads finding it harder to make ends meet going back to school is becoming a readily solution to the changing economy. Many of these adults who come back to school find it hard to adjust to the new lifestyle led by most adolescentence in todays society. Young adults have experinced more in the art of scheduling life around school and well the new breed of college students find it hard because a classroom is not what was once thought of. Now most professors require more out of class work than in class work which can be diffucult for families or parents.
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Post by demonchantress on Jul 21, 2004 22:49:46 GMT -5
Thank you all for the help you have giving me. I have to go to bed now, I can hardly see straight. I will be back on at 7 ish am to finish my paper.
I hope sometime I can help you, like you have helped me.
Nite all.
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Post by WorldOfPain on Jul 21, 2004 22:57:51 GMT -5
have a nice sleep, chant. Don't work too hard .
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Post by DarkAngelLucifer on Jul 21, 2004 23:36:20 GMT -5
hello everyone how everyone doing,,,if anyone needs help in the world i am here! entering college soon so headache will begin *oh the agony*!
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Post by TheGentleStorm on Jul 22, 2004 22:58:01 GMT -5
so how did your paragraph turn out?
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Post by demonchantress on Jul 22, 2004 23:31:00 GMT -5
good, but won't know till the wicked teach writes all over it.
sha says if she hates it, it will not be written on
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Post by TheGentleStorm on Jul 22, 2004 23:32:14 GMT -5
interestin but not the answereing i was looking for, i want to know what the paragraph looks like
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